Tuesday, October 14, 2008

daphne!


comments and suggestions PLZ.

1 comment:

Jenni Neill said...

hey why is the top of the stem of the h slanted the other direction? haha :]

there's a big gap where on the d from the serif/overshoot thingy... maybe make it more like the rest... and watch the gaps on the letters... some of them aren't the same width as the rest of them and top of the e is a little heavier than the rest of the letters too... is the top of the d supposed to be slanting up? maybe make it straight? lol

that's my 2 cents.